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Sweet Syrup

by IH | Score: 1900

She's really gone now. I didn't even get to say  goodbye to her properly and now, she's dead, and i killed her. I didn't mean to kill her, I would never want her dead. 
We were at her house cooking pancakes and she went to the bathroom but when she came back she scared me and i accidently swung the bottle of syrup viscously and hit her head. She fell and I immediately went to her but she wasn't breathing anymore.  I wanted to get in my van and leave but I couldn't bring myself to do it. I took her phone and hid it well. I decided i was going to lie and say that we were venting to each other and someone broke in and hit her in the head with the syrup and s

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