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Persuer Of The End

by Brynlee | Score: 3750

I heard sirens in the distance. I gasped for breath as Dream left me alone. "TOMMY!!" My brother yelled as he ran over to me. "H- he got the chip." My brother's face paled. "It's ok. It's ok Tommy we don't need to worry about that right now ok?" I nodded and tried to sit up. "Hey, don't sit up you're losing a lot of blood from the cut in your chest." I whimpered and leaned on my brother. The paramedics quickly came over and we went to the hospital. When I came to there was a ringing noise and I heard movement. People were whispering to each other and I slowly sat up. "Oh, Tommy you're awake!" The doctor said, surprised. I nodded. Suddenly there was yelling from outside. "Stay here." The doctor and nurse left the room. They came back in once the yelling stopped with Wilbur. "Hey, Tommy." I smiled.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Sirens sound in the distance
Event Important data is stolen
Words Reach 50 words
Words Reach 50 words
Words Reach 100 words
Words Reach 50 words
Words Reach 100 words
Character A funny locksmith
Event There's a strange noise
Event Someone wins the lottery

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