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A Trip Back To Paris

by Aeopxie | Score: 4250

I step into the time machine. zzzzzzzz. Before I knew it, I was in front of an old french bakery shop. As I was observing the world around me, I see a french painter, holding his paintbrush and a canvas. When I look at the middle of the street, I see a traffic warden, who seems very immodest. I got into the bakery. "I'd love a croissant!" is what I said to the baker. Sorry buddy, we are out of croissants!" said the baker in a lovely french accent. Suddenly, everything turns black, did I got blind or something?? Soon after, I wake up to the sound of a kitchen sink flooding the whole kitchen. I was lucky I woke up. Something I noticed was that there was a bar of soap clogging the sink... weird, but smart. When I opened the kitchen door that was locked, the water flooded out and took a very (slight) man with it. As I look over his awards and certificates, it seems as if he is a careers advisor. Someone suddenly opens the door. Who is it now? I ask myself. Oh- hey, what are you.. doing here? Says a lady that looks around my age. "Are you french? Because Eiffel for you!" Looking back, I regret saying that. Very bland and very cringey.  "No, I am a quite independent building labourer, who is half french and half arab and is visiting Paris." Well take me somewhere I can meet other beautiful women like you! No thanks, I have a girlfriend, and I don't think she'd like that.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Your character travels into the future
Prop Include a paint brush
Words Reach 50 words
Character An immodest traffic warden
Letter Use the letter L
Event Your character goes blind
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a bar of soap
Character A slight careers advisor
Words Reach 200 words
Letter Use the letter G
Event Someone falls in love
Character An independent building labourer
Letter Use the letter H

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