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Kate's trip

by Ella | Score: 3950

Kate stormed out of her office- well her former office, she felt something crinkle under her high heels- a candy wrapper. Kids- they like to litter. She rolled her eyes and continued walking. She reached the bus stop and waited. After a minuet the bus came by and she got on. She sat next to a woman, she had tortoise shell glasses.
"Hi," Kate moved away from the woman.
"I take it you lost your job?"
"How did you know?"
"I just do. I'm Kelly a maternal book-keeper."
 "Kate." Kelly smiled and looked out the window. There was a flash of light and the bus crashed into a building.
Kate looked up, there was a ringing in her ears and teh bus was in pieces- it made no since, the bus was supposed to stay mostly intact. Kelly was a few feel from her, pulling herself out from under a seat. She had on a pair of safety goggles, her glasses were gone.
Kelly mouth was moving but Kate couldn't hear anything. There was a man a few yards away crying. Kelly pulled Kate out of the debris. What Kate assumed was a BANG! rattled the ground. The rest of the building started crumbling, Kelly opened her mouth and let out what Kate assumed was a scream. A builder was falling with the building. The debris was floating. Kelly was making it float, Kelly had powers. 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Your character loses his/her job
Prop Include a candy wrapper
Letter Use the letter I
Words Reach 50 words
Character A maternal book-keeper
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter N
Prop Include a pair of safety goggles
Event Your character goes deaf
Event Dad just sits and cries
Letter Use the letter E
Words Reach 200 words
Character A sensitive builder

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