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The ending of a rhino

by Amelia | Score: 5200

Kara ran around the corner of the nearest alley, trying to escape the nearing men in black suits with devilish grins on their faces. Realizing the alley had a dead end, Kara tried to turn around and run back out, but the men had already caught up. Her heart catching in her throat at the sight, she opens her mouth and cries out for help as loud as she cane. Nothing. No one answers and the men just come closer.
"What do you want from me?" Kara screams, tears pouring down her cheeks like rain during a hurricane. They men just smile wider. Kara sends a small prayer in hope of something to save her. As the front man reaches his hands out, a knife grasped tightly in one of them, a sudden thunk stops them all mid step. They turn and see that one of their men is lying on the ground, knocked unconscious. Next to his head is a tube of toothpaste. Five more tubes fly through the air and connect with the remaining mens's heads. They all fall to the ground. A rumbling ensues from the street, the reason remaining unseen. Then suddenly, out of the collecting shadows, a rhino launches itself into the alleyway. Kara screams and nearly faints in fear, but a young boy her age steps off and she shakes her head, still conscious. He smiles at her and points his finger towards her chest.
"You seem like you need some super powers," He yells, as green lightning zaps her in the chest. She collapses, bu then jumps back up again and flies into the air. She zooms above a bank clerk making his way home, and he is so uncertain about what is going on, he faints on the spot. BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! The world suddenly explodes and civilization comes to an end in that moment. A wristwatch floats into space, crashing against the windshield of an alien UFO. The mature alien inside, known as The Judge to his fellows, smiles and knows what is going on. 
"Klack! Klick!" He yells to them, and they run out of the cockpit. His book-keeper comes in and says the most positive thing she can think of.
"at least now they are out of the way. We have nothing now to worry about. THen a sudden storm ruins theur de

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Words Reach 50 words
Event Someone cries for help
Letter Use the letter N
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a tube of toothpaste
Words Reach 200 words
Prop Include a rhino
Letter Use the letter U
Event Someone gains superpowers
Character An uncertain bank clerk
Words Reach 300 words
Event Civilization has come to an end
Prop Include a wristwatch
Character A mature judge
Letter Use the letter K
Character A positive book-keeper

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