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the baby in the attic

by carter bake | Score: 3150

i noticed a baby crying it sounded like it was coming from the attic. i walked closer to the attic and sure enough it got louder and louder. oh boy i better call mom i thought. so i did when she answered i heard someone outside calling for help it was my sister mandalyn i told my mom she said get away from the attic i'll be there soon. i got even more worried so i went outside to mandalyn she cried saying i had sex with my boss and i can't believe it he's a douche why would you do that because he look so hot in his sexy underwear. okay and you don't do that. i know i know she said. mom pulled in the driveway with a gun she shot my sister in the head and then told me i dont have enough time to explain and told me to get in. i refused obviously because i thought that was the smart thing to do but i looked behind me and there was no body. what just happened. i started freaking out. mom said i was better off with her so i got in the front seat of the car. wheres her body i demanded an answer but she wouldnt tell finally i drug i tout of her and she told me i wasn't in reality and i had not actually seen her. i asked how did you see her then and she told me i can see everything you see before you see it thats why your mostly never in

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Words Reach 50 words
Event Someone cries for help
Words Reach 100 words
Character A passionate bailiff
Prop Include a pasta strainer
Letter Use the letter E
Words Reach 200 words
Event A murder needs to be solved
Prop Include a statuette

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