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by Uh | Score: 4150

There is nothing going on,  in the  bar it's silent. All of a sudden a man barges in and takes a seat. He's very tall almost 7 feet tall, huge arms, and looks like he can take on an elephant. He brings in boxes of soy sauce packets with him. Another man comes up to him and they begin whispering about something. Everyone in the room is staring at the two men. Out of nowhere the tall man man slams his fist on the table and says "No deal." Everyone is gloomy and it begins to pour outside. The shorter and scrawny man who came up to the tall man originally walks out with his head down.  A woman walks into the bar, soaked with water and a fishing rod in her hand. She doesn't seem very pleasant but she begins to walk slowly towards the man with soy sauce. She places a wishbone on the table and doesn't say a word. The man looks at her nods and she takes a box of soy sauce packets. The woman began to go on her way but the air condition that was hanging above the door falls and it hits the woman right in the eyes. Everyone surrounds the woman as she shrieks in pain and misery. One of the men surrounding the woman is an ambitious clerical assistant who tries to help her. He looks at her face and his smile turns upside down. He looks very displeased and sad. He tells everyone around "She's gone blind." The whole crow gasps. The clerical assistant gets up and begins to dance and asks anyone if they would like to play a game. No one answer

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Prop Include a soy sauce packet
Words Reach 50 words
Event An important deal falls through
Event It pours
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter W
Character An unpleasant fisherman/woman
Letter Use the letter L
Prop Include a wishbone
Words Reach 200 words
Prop Include an air conditioner
Character An ambitious clerical assistant
Letter Use the letter H
Event Your character goes blind

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