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Trained Rhinos are Deadly

by Huck Norris | Score: 4500

A siren sounded in the distance.
"Poop head!" The criminal mastermind cursed. He turned to the men beside him. "Get moving you useless kranky henchmen!" Being a methodical builder, he had once had the experience to build things. Though never to steal. As he directed his crew, he didn't watch where he was going and slipped on a bar of soap. What he didn't realize was that he had tripped an alarm system. The had tried desperately to turn it off but the computer was hacked. Now, they scrammbled out of the building and looked around for the escape vehicle.
"Blast!" The criminal shouted. He checked his watch. "Jerry should be here! Where is he??" At that moment, a tolerant aromatherapist had drove up, looking suspisously around him. 
"Get in!" He hissed gesturing towards the criminals. Before they had the chance to even open the door, a rhino charged  the van. After a scream of surprise, Jerry yelled, "I'm okay! Pain tolerance!" After looking closer, the mastermind determined that the rhino had a police symbol on it. The criminal mastermind gasped. 
"A police trained rhinosourous??!!" He turned to his henchmen. "Why didn't you think of that??" Once a touchy fisherman, one of the hench men had turned to crime. Now, looking annoyed at his new boss, he rolled his eyes. 
"Tech these days," He said as way of explaination. Then a smoke bomb detenated. The air turned black all around them. They coughed. 
"The novel!" The mastermind cried. "I need it! I dropped it!" Then one of the hench men, normally so quite yelled.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Sirens sound in the distance
Letter Use the letter K
Character A methodical builder
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include a bar of soap
Event A computer is hacked
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter B
Character A tolerant aromatherapist
Prop Include a rhino
Letter Use the letter A
Character A touchy fisherman/woman
Words Reach 200 words
Event The air turns black all around
Letter Use the letter E
Prop Include a novel

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