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a boy and desiree

by Avis | Score: 6850

Once there was a young boy who lived in a small house with his parents. There was a great storm and with a crash there was suddenly a waterfall in his bedroom. Come morning he said, "its over" And it was. There was still the big hole in the roof to consider though. Never fear though his parents would take care of it. This is what he thought at least as the light rose over the horizon.   His parents seemed just as confused as what to do though. Luckily his mom's friend the frank fashion designer showed up to help.  An important fashion deal had fallen through and he had come to see his mom to see if she had any advice. His mom was like sure but can you help us with this first. He was so offended. "this means war!" That was so like him to get all upset that others needed help. What about them? What were they to do. Instead of helping, the only one to show up was so focused on themselves that they left them to be on their own to take care of the shit they found themselves in.  He had stormed off so quickly that he left the canvas with his ideas behind.   The boy thought they should ransom it back to him. His parents nixed that idea though way too quickly in his opinion. Next to show up was the rather sleepy politician who lived next door. He took one look at the mess and left. Was there anyone who could help.  "I wish I could travel into the past to stop this!" the boy said out loud. "So you have wished it so it shall be said the ghost of genie that showed up out of nowhere.  "Wait what?" the boy said and suddenly it is the previous day right as the storm was about to kick off.  Not taking this  chance for granted the boy ran to his father to tell him the tree was creaking rather badly. The tree that would put the hole in the roof needed to be taken down before it crashed. His father was horrified. "I'm sorry. I had not realized that the tree could be dangerous." he said. He went to grab a saw and knocked over a spice bottle in his haste.  He quickly cut the tree down before the storm hit.  They were very lucky.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event There is a great storm
Location A waterfall
Sentence "It's over."
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter N
Prop Include a light
Words Reach 100 words
Character A frank fashion designer
Event An important deal falls through
Sentence "This means war."
Letter Use the letter I
Words Reach 200 words
Prop Include a canvas
Character A sleepy politician
Words Reach 300 words
Event Your character travels into the past
Sentence "I'm sorry."
Words Reach 400 words
Prop Include a spice bottle

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