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The Betrayal

by Lunish | Score: 2400

''How dare they do such a thing'' he said, tears streaming down his porcelain white face.  Tristan slapped Emily across the face. He never knew that she would betray him at this very moment. They've been through soo much together and he wasn't ready to throw away eight years of meaningful friendship. Emily's eyes were empty. ''Your gonna pay'' he said, holding in his anger. She seemed to have no emotion after what she had done. ''What are you gonna do Tristan, you have no one left on your side'' she said, tightly clutching the fabric of her shirt. As harsh as it sounded, she was right. She told her pretty words like blades how glistening they showed. Tristan grabbed a belt from his bedroom drawer and spanked Emily on the shoulder. She screamed and pushed him away.  

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Letter Use the letter T
Words Reach 50 words
Words Reach 100 words
Character A snobby judge
Event Important data is stolen
Prop Include a whip
Event Your character plots revenge
Prop Include a toy plane

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