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This Is It Now

by Lizzy404 | Score: 3550

Techno's POV
I heard some yelling. It sounded like someone was yelling for help. "Wait- is that Tommy?!?!" I ran and saw Jacob towering over him. His camp was gone. "You're an idiot, Tommy." I could see the fear in his eyes. "Leave him be Jacob, for gods job and sake." I said stepping into the clearing. Jacob looked shocked. Tommy started to stand up, but Jacob punched him and he went back down when he did. "You're going to be out of a job after this." Dream walked into the clearing. "Learn to control your brother better dream." I went over to Tommy and helped him up. "Thanks Techno." He whispered. I watched as Dream and Jacob left the clearing. Tommy grabbed his shovel and put it away. I could see him shaking. "Lets go home." "Ok." I saw him shiver. We got back home and I draped a blanket over him. He quickly fell asleep after that. I smiled and sat down next to him and did school work. "For example, if you use an ax rather than a sword it will do more damage where as the sword is better if you're a beginner rather than an Ax." Tommy shifted and clutched something. I looked closer and noticed scars that may have came f

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Location A camp
Event Someone cries for help
Sentence "You're an idiot."
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter J
Event Someone loses his/her job
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a shovel
Prop Include a blanket
Words Reach 200 words

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