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by Anonymous | Score: 5050

It has been fourteen years since the death of my family. I have grown much since then. I now sit at the edge of my bed plotting, thinking, scheming. Those men took my parents and little brother from me. And they will PAY! My mother always used to tell me that if you intend to intact revenge on someone, then you must dig two graves. All I know right now about the men who killed my family was that one of them was a zealous aromatherapist. 
Although I should probably act fast in finding my family's murderers because there is a meteor approaching earth and fast! I look to my desk and see a box of open markers, they were my little brother, Mark's. Why did they have to die?! Why couldn't it be me? I looked at the family photo on the mantle; I wish they were still here. My mother was a stern economist, and my father was a doctor. 

"Hey, Makenna." My best friend Simon said. I could smell the alcohol on him. He was clearly drunk. He walked on over to me and turned on the radio. "It's very depressing in here." He saw the board above my bed. "Are you still searching for your parent's killers?"

I looked at him and nodded, getting up from my bed and walking to the drawing board. Simon was a curious pharmacist so he was sometimes no help. I told him that they were killed as someone was robbing a bank.  However, they were killed immediately, no. They were tortured with a whip and I intended to do the very same. These men will regret that they ever messed with MaKenna 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Prop Include a bed
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter M
Character A zealous aromatherapist
Words Reach 100 words
Event A meteor approaches Earth
Prop Include a box of markers
Letter Use the letter Y
Character A stern economist
Event Someone is drunk
Prop Include a radio
Words Reach 200 words
Letter Use the letter B
Character A curious pharmacist
Event A bank is robbed
Event Your character plots revenge
Prop Include a whip

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