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comedyville

by simon lutz | Score: 5950

It's a cold, dark day at the mulany family mansion. theres been a murder. the famous detective, jerry Seinfeld has been called in to solve the crime. he's looking around the crime scene for any evidence. his reluctant assistant, jimmy Fallon,  is trying to help him look, but hes not much help. on the floor, they find a shattered coffee mug, that looks like its been violently thrown. a struggle of some kind. if only they could use a computer program to figure out where it had been thrown from. then, a flash of inspiration lit up jerry's mind like fireworks. An a.i that can analyze crime scenes to figure out who committed the crime and how it played out. he rushed away from the crime scene, and started sprinting down the road towards the small town of comedyville that he lived in. he passed a dull looking driving instructor who was holding a packet of seeds for some reason. he suddenly head a baby crying from an alleyway. perplexed, he skid to a halt and went into the alleyway. there was a small baby crying violently, with no adult in site. jerry gently picked up the baby, and the heard a gun being loaded behind him. he saw... conan his old career advisor? he had a glock in hand, and it was pointed directly at jerry. "drop the baby jerry. you dont know what you're getting into."
" no conan. I recognize this child. this is the a.i isn't it?"
"how did you know that..."
"you have no idea what i know."
then, a hooded figure falls from the fire escape above, and pulls the pin on a strange, silver grenade in his hand. he throws it on the ground and jumps 10 feet into the air, as the explosion shoots out, a airwave shattering jerry's eardrums. then, a cop runs around the corner. hes wearing a trafic wardens outfit, and he looks quite snobby. conan shoots him in the face, and runs. jerry still cant hear, but he knows hes yelling somethin

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event A murder needs to be solved
Letter Use the letter H
Character A reluctant clerical assistant
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include a coffee mug
Words Reach 100 words
Event Someone has a world-changing idea
Letter Use the letter C
Prop Include a packet of seeds
Character A dull driving instructor
Event A baby cries
Letter Use the letter J
Words Reach 200 words
Character A thinking careers advisor
Prop Include a computer
Event Your character goes deaf
Letter Use the letter W
Words Reach 300 words
Character A snobby traffic warden

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