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Weeping Dreams (Draft 2)

by FlowerGhoul170_X | Score: 5000

I swore I didn't do anything wrong, I swear! I dropped the toothbrush and looked at the door with Zahra crying. She was holding a plush dog I gave her 2 months ago and tried to walk up to her. But then my sister appeared in front of me. "Julian, what the hell..?", I was really confused about what she was talking about until she pulled out a knife and almost threw it at me, was it really my fault? I just wanted to save everyone. She grabbed Zahra and disappeared with her. I was all alone in her room. I looked and looked and the static around the room came closer as it "jjzzzzs". I saw Rei, she was looking at the sky with her golden hair and her stretched-out wings. Then I noticed she was holding my relic. As she looked at me, she attempted to put it on and I ran to her. But my crutches disappeared and I crawled for my life trying to beg her to stop. Then cards fell down and everything went blind. Now I see Alan? He's looking at his dead body of Melissa. Butterflies were covering her but, is it possible I went into his dream, or is this another loop to figuring out what really happened to Alisa? Or otherwise, this is a false blame riot about me. I went up to Alan and set next to him, my relic slowly looped around me as I healed Melissa from her forehead to her chest. He starts smiling with happiness and hugs me. I was glad to help but the air turns black around us. I knew this wasn't a dream, I felt Alan. He's real.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event A baby cries
Prop Include a plush dog
Words Reach 50 words
Character A dull shop assistant
Words Reach 100 words
Event Your character is all alone
Prop Include a paintbrush
Letter Use the letter R
Character An unguarded cleric
Letter Use the letter J
Event Someone loses his/her job
Prop Include a playing card
Words Reach 200 words
Character An uncertain mortician
Event The air turns black all around
Prop Include a feather duster

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