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the girl who diddnt survive

by willow barrie | Score: 2700

one day i was at home just chilling on the couch watching tv it was a christmas movie called the grinch it is december thats why im watching a Cristmas movie its so funny its about this green beast that hates christmas that tries to take christmas from this town.  and then out of nowere there was a earthquack a paintbrush came out of nowere and hit me in the head ouch that hurt and then my sisster yelled out 'owwwwwwwww' out of nowere i stait away ran to her room to make shure she was okay but no she wasnt did i meantion a really big stor no i dont think i did sorry there was a really big gum tree above her room and it got struck by lightning and you already know what happened it fell on her head and she broke her leg and arm wait no both omg i yelled we need to take you to the hospital when we got there it was a 1 hour drive and she was still crying when we got to the hospital and the docters said she wasnt going to be able to servive i burst into tea

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Letter Use the letter H
Words Reach 50 words
Event Your character wakes up with a start
Prop Include a paintbrush
Words Reach 100 words
Event There is a great storm
Letter Use the letter L
Words Reach 200 words

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