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Drunk Malone

by Okutabu | Score: 1950

It was dark. The night sky was above everyone in Ireland. Scott Malone was drinking in a pub. He was alone. No one in there would accompany him.  Drunk, he would stand up and go puke outside. But he fell. He was feeling tired. "Zzzzz" was what we could here from the distance. It was like in a comic book. To drunk to stand up again, Malone stayed lay down. He would try to hear if someone was coming to help him, but he couldn't hear anything. It was like he became deaf. But then someone came and helped him stand up. It was a strong young man in his twenty's. He helped Scott going outside. There Malone puked all his drinks. Normally, he would be a-okay now that he puked, but then he felt something like burning in his heart. He looked at his partner and the sensation became stronger. "Was it love ?" No couldn't be. Scott was not gay. But the more he looked at the young man, the more he felt burning down. It was love. 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Letter Use the letter Z
Words Reach 50 words
Event Someone is drunk
Prop Include a comic book
Event Your character goes deaf
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter Y

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