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Thin Surfaces

by gustavothecreator | Score: 3700

Fazia dez meses desde a Ășltima vez que eu havia estado com ela. Era inverno e as you know winter is longe and extremely cold. So, as an average driving instructor, i advised all my students to get off the road, that was expected to be frozen. But she stood there, all snob and stuff. So i called her and asked her name. She didn't answer and i began feeling anxious, while she smiled at me with humor. She was indeed enjoying the situation, while i was extremely worried that she would just slip upon the ice or get run over, i dont know. So, Ms Jameela, an uncertain acupuncturist that took some biking classes in the institution said she would call the guards and i asked her not to do it, because i thought i could handle the situation. So i stopped her while other students started coming closer and Jameelas baby started crying. I started walking towards her, walking really upset, while she began laughing out loud. I looked back and Ms Jameela was speaking to one of the guards that confirmed something with his head and pulled out a radio. So when i was almost reaching her, she started to skate on the frozen floor, just like a child. I shouted at her but she didn't care. I tried to grab her arm but she ran away from me then a cleaning truck appeared from nowhere and hit her with all the strength it had. I knew in that moment that i would not be a teacher of the institution anymore. .

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Winter is long and extremely cold
Words Reach 50 words
Character An average driving instructor
Letter Use the letter M
Words Reach 100 words
Character An uncertain acupuncturist
Prop Include a radio
Words Reach 200 words
Event Your character loses his/her job
Letter Use the letter G
Event A baby cries

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