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Sam's package

by Ella | Score: 3000

Sam walked to the door. His package was here! HE struggled to open the lock but got it open. He quickly sighed the papers teh post man held out to him. He tore open the package.
"Okay this isn't right." Inside was a black box, not teh new T-shirt her ordered. Someone knocked on the door.
"That better be the post man." Sam grumbled instead it was a man in a suit. 
"Excuse me sir I'm from Regional bank. I'm the clerk I think you might have my box."
"Oh yeah come in., The man walked through the door, "Did you open the box?"
"The box in the box, no.""Thank goodness!"
"I'm afraid I can't tell you Sam."
"How do you know my name? I never told you."
The bank clerk sighed, "I was hoping to avoid this seeing as you're not an adult but, your adopted and your birth father had quite a lot of money he left for you, and that black box has all the-." The black box was empty. "How? They know, they know he had it."
"HAD WHAT?" Sam asked.
"Your father was also in a league of sorts. On intended to stop corruption, however the corrupt got word we were onto them and killed your father,"
"Sam I know this is a lot for you but-."Something exploded- the air conditioner to be exact, "No, they found us."
"The bad 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Words Reach 50 words
Event A package is delivered
Character A superficial bank clerk
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter X
Event Important data is stolen
Words Reach 200 words
Letter Use the letter K
Prop Include an air conditioner

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