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Jordan's Recovery

by Amy | Score: 5900

After a car crash caused by a drunk curator named Jaden, Jordan became blind. He found out later that week his wife, Mila, had been cheating on him and due to his new condition, Jordan would probably lose custody of their kids, Alfie and Milena.
Jordan hired a lawyer, Aleeza, who helped him file for divorce. This however, caused a lot of the communtiy to hate him, as many people liked Mila's family and din't believe Jordan. One man even through a wishbone at him.
It turned out, Mila was pregnant with her affair partner, Khalid's, child but pinned the fatherhood on Jordan. Aleeza hired a popular laboratory technician, Macie, to prove Jordan was not the father.
Even though the court was convinced, Jordan's old neighbours and family were not.
Jordan became depressed and tried to commit suicide, which gave Mila the leverage she needed to get custody of the kids, claiming Jordan an 'unfit parent'.
Macie sent Jordan to stay with a friend in another state, Billie, who taught him how to make small statuettes. Billie fell in love with Jordan after he helped her injured dog, who fell from a high place.
However, when Mila learnt of this, she was furious, and tried to get Jordan to come back to her. When he refused, she tried to ruin Billie's reputation as a reserved economist. 
Gina, Billie's big sister, and Guerto, Billie's big brother, both hated Mila for trying to ruin their sisters reputation and threw seeds at her near a flock of pigeons, causing the pigeons to attack her and terrify her.
She was so scared, she had a miscarriage and lost Khalid's baby. Mila grew depressed while Billie and Jordan dated. Mila grew negligent of Milena and Alfie and after a firefighter realized she was starving them, he reported her.
Mila's parental rights were terminated and the kids moved back in with their father.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Your character goes blind
Character A drunk curator
Letter Use the letter O
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include a wishbone
Event Someone is pregnant
Words Reach 100 words
Character A popular laboratory technician
Letter Use the letter H
Prop Include a statuette
Event Someone's dog is injured
Words Reach 200 words
Character A reserved economist
Letter Use the letter G
Prop Include a packet of seeds
Event Your character sees something terrifying
Character An uncertain firefighter
Words Reach 300 words

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