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The biggest betrayal

by Anonymous | Score: 3150


 ¨No stop wait no i´m innocent you have the wrong person you can't leave me in here. I´m married with children…well here I am and how do you think I ended up here a man that was accused of stealing and trespassing over a mistake I didn't make. I took my two girls for a work in the park when an unknown woman in a red dress got very unusually close to my eldest daughter, picking her up and running off into the crown of a farmers market where she disappeared behind a banana bread stand with my daughter still in hand. I in a frantic panic i yell my daughter´s name ¨Emma¨ no response ¨sir is everything alright?¨ while a warm arm laid on my shoulder. In a raspy voice trying to hold back tears i say ¨no a woman in a red dress with a floral hat and sunglasses took my eldest daughter Emma¨ oh dear well i wont leave your side until we rescue your daughter and bring her back into your arms. As a single mother I can relate to the emotions you must be feeling. I work at a pharmacy so we can go there and call the police. Alright thank you so so much, reaching her pharmacy ¨oh sorry but the air conditionor hasn´t been working in a few days sorry about that¨

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter S
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a banana
Event Someone goes to prison
Event Your character goes deaf
Character A reserved pharmacist
Words Reach 200 words
Prop Include an air conditioner

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