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My Trip to Jamaica

by Mady Walz | Score: 6100

Once apon a time an airplane crashed and I died. Well, they thought I died but I didn't. So, obviously that is why I am still here talking to you! My name is Kati and here is my story. 
We were on our way to the Bahamas and the air conditioner blew up, which blew up the entire plane. It sucked. Clearly. I lost my mother, father, and my Slim Jim. I was really hungry! But luckily I fell in a swimming pool in Jamica. And no, the water impact didn't kill me, though it should've. My mom Jen and my dad Robert were fighting a lot on the plane, and it was stressful. So maybe it was a good thing. Some other people, such as Jannie, Jack, and Ruby servived. Somebody gave us 1 million dollars to live off of. 
The first thing we bought was a giant paint brush. (we had to fix the pool) We used many paintbrushes variing in size. 
The pool owner was hosting a party entitled "Christ Christmas candy cane Came," and we were envited! 
Suddenly all the grill started to smoke, turning all the air in Jamica black. 
The black air ruined our teeth, so we went to see a local dentist. He was a b****. He was very mad at me, and his shirt was UNBUTTONED! His name was Ben the berry bendy black button. 
After we went to the dentist we had to find a job. And I got a job working at the dentist office, but Ben fired me. I don't like Ben very much. At all. 
We saw some very concerning behavior and images on our way out. I cringed. 
I stole a skiing jacket and used it as a boat to find my parents again. I love them. 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Event An airplane crashes
Begin Start typing to begin
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include an air conditioner
Words Reach 100 words
Event A fight breaks out
Letter Use the letter J
Character A noisy craftsperson
Prop Include a paint brush
Letter Use the letter C
Character An idle moneylender
Event The air turns black all around
Words Reach 200 words
Prop Include a shirt button
Character A stern dentist
Letter Use the letter B
Event Your character loses his/her job
Character An immodest mortician
Words Reach 300 words
Prop Include a skiing jacket

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