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The Family

by Sauncie | Score: 3800

This is so boring Kaity said as she sat with her mom Trish waiting for her sister to get out of school. She had a dentist appointment that day. Oh how she hated the dentist. The bell rang and her sister came running to the car with a box of markers in her hand. Look what I got, look what I got Brenda said. Brenda got in the car and shut the door. Almost instantly she started to cry; help, help, help! she had slammed her fingers in the door. Trish jumped out of the car and opened the car door. They ran into the school to the nurse. Mrs. Ward was the nurse, cam out of her office to usher the girls in. She used tongs to grab ice and put it in a bag for Brenda. After Brenda felt better the girls went back to the car and went home. Later on Trish received a phone call. It was a mortician, He had the wrong number and was so snobby! It wasn't Trishe's fault he wrote down the wrong number. Just as Trish got off the phone James walked in. You're home early, Trish said. Honey I lost my job said James. But I brought home chinese food! and I made sure there were soy sauce packets too. James worked as a marketing director, or did. His boss was 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Nothing interesting happens
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include a box of markers
Letter Use the letter P
Event Someone cries for help
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a pair of tongs
Letter Use the letter W
Character A snobby mortician
Words Reach 200 words
Event Your character loses his/her job
Prop Include a soy sauce packet

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