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The Criminal and the Note

by SkysTheLimit | Score: 3300

"SHOTS FIRED" a police officer said. Another police officer threw an egg at a window to break it leaving a gooey mess on the now broken window. The Criminal was still inside the house, holding Veronica and Verban captive. "BOOM" one of the police officers shouted from behind a tree, an explosion went off as soon as she said it.  The Criminal jumps out the window and starts running. "I'll catch him" one police officer said while running after the criminal." "He's very fast I dont think I could keep up!" The police officer jumps onto the criminal pinning him down on the floor and handcuffed him.  As the criminal and the police officer walk back to the crime scene Veronica comes out crying. Verban screams to one of the police officers, "HELP, Veronica is pregnant she needs medical help!!"  The police officer holding the criminal says, "dude...you're under arrest for attempt of murder."  The police officer puts the criminal into his prison cell and gives him a spice bottle to drink. "I really thought you were going to get away. To bad im extremely good at my job." The criminal was minding his buisness later that day in his cell when he got a Mysterious letter saying, "I can get you out of here... just follow my rules" but the rest of the rules were smudged off the paper due to water droplets.  The Criminal lay in his cell thinking over and over again what he did. The End

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Prop Include an egg
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter V
Words Reach 100 words
Event Someone is pregnant
Event Someone goes to prison
Prop Include a spice bottle
Letter Use the letter R
Words Reach 200 words
Event A mysterious letter arrives

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