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Acupuncture at its finest

by William And Rio | Score: 4250

Wham! Bam! The blows reverbrate off every area struck, my head, arms legs. I struggle to regain my footing to see what is going on. Strggling to keep the tears in I cry in pain.  I know I thought this was a good idea at the start and the staff that welcomed me in here reassured me but the stinging feeling in every pressure point of my body was too much. Though as afraid as I was I was even more afraid to move. All of a sudden the next wave of pain flowed through me like an aeroplane crashing to land. The sushi I had ate before hand was feeling especially apparent with every breath I took as I clutched onto the only object from before, the spare soy sauce packet I forgot to use. The pain was unbearable and thinking about it made me think about how much more pain I could be in. Not too long ago my sister was pregnant and this pain couldn't even be comparable. Though, all at once the pain vanished to be replaced with a calm cooling feeling flowing through my back. I know I had lost my bet with my sister of which had told me that it would hurt but I wouldn't listen.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event A fight breaks out
Letter Use the letter C
Prop Include a fork
Character A warmhearted acupuncturist
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter T
Words Reach 100 words
Event An airplane crashes
Prop Include a soy sauce packet
Letter Use the letter Y
Event Someone is pregnant
Prop Include a bottle of lotion
Words Reach 200 words
Event Your character loses a game

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