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My Death

by Mady Walz | Score: 6150

When I lost the game of Life, it actually killed me. It was a normal rainy Sunday afternoon, and I was spending time with my family. Now I spend my days scaring the angry pastor at St. Angelica Church. 
I was picking tomatoes and I saw a vision. An angel told me my time was running low. So of course I did the right thing, and smacked her. Now, Nina the nice angel, wasn't so nice after that. So when I ran out of money playing a board game, it killed me. Literally. 
Besides scary Pastor Duke, I sit in silence. There are a few other dead guys who have interesting stories, but not many. 
However there is this warmhearted builder named Bob, who finally couldn't build it. Otherwise we also sew plush dogs to hand out in haunted house. It makes the young ladies very happy. Very, very, very happy. At least until a ghost scares them. \
One day I was with my sister, but she didn't know it. But I scared her, and gave her a heart atack. But she went somewhere else when she died. (if ya know what I mean) 
SUDDENLY! A meteor approches earth, and kills me AGAIN! I can't belive it. This time I join my sister, who has become an ambitios handyman. I set e Percy Jackson with Annabeth and Grover, I wave, but they don't see me. 
I find a past strainer in a bucket of free stuff, hopefully i can vring some water in it. I scream and yell out, " I VERY MUCH VIGOURSULY NEED SOME VERY VERY VERY GOOD HELP!" don't ask me why though. I won't be able to answer. I just needed help. 
A butler hands me a plate of pancakes,  and I stuff them in my face agresivily. I I I I I I I I I I I love, pancakes I say with a stutter. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA AH AH AH AH AH AH. 
ANd then a guy in a yellow vest wacks with a orange batoon and wakes me from my sleep. "Hello there officer!" 
"YOU FELL ASLEEP ON SHIFT!" he hand me a bangle bracelet. Ugh, it's my turn to give the boss her birthday gift.  Came and can't coat carrie can. 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Your character loses a game
Character A passive cleric
Prop Include a tomato
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter N
Words Reach 100 words
Event Silence
Character A warmhearted builder
Prop Include a plush dog
Letter Use the letter I
Event A meteor approaches Earth
Words Reach 200 words
Character An ambitious handyman
Prop Include a pasta strainer
Letter Use the letter V
Words Reach 300 words
Event Breakfast is served
Character A miserable traffic warden
Prop Include a bangle bracelet
Letter Use the letter C

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