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the day i got a concussion

by Aleksandar Zalac | Score: 4550

I was fast asleep when this sound woke me up, like a wierd warping sound.
Then i saw a bright light outside of my window, i got concerned so then i went outside and saw a delivery drive ordering pizza i ordered for dinner last night!?
but behind him was a LARGE flying object with ALIENS running out, i trembled and ran inside as quick as i could only to find and egg on my bed.
the aliens were running into my house with guns blasting all around. i look at them and get blinded by there ugliness! i cant see a thing! suddenly i feel a bangle bracelet pop up on to my wrist. i find glasses and i can see again! but then the air turns black when the aliens get closer. SUDDENLY the aliens just wanted me to sign up for a fund raiser so i did. they went away. but before they left one of the aliens said ''JOE MAMA' and threw a brown desk at my face, i got a concussion. and then i saw another alien still in my house he said dont tell the others i dont want to go back with them... i sadly agreed. 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Letter Use the letter I
Character An unpleasant delivery driver
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include an egg
Event Aliens invade
Letter Use the letter L
Event Your character goes blind
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a bangle bracelet
Event The air turns black all around
Character An average fundraiser
Letter Use the letter J
Prop Include a desk
Words Reach 200 words
Event An important deal falls through

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