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Fourth try ( A bad Day)

by Jennifer | Score: 5050

It was a mistake to travel into the past.  As soon as Brent the joyous managing director stepped into the time-machine, he ammedeatlly reregreted it.  The day had gone off to a bad start when Brent accidenlty put spice on his pancakes.  Yung Ya Young, his neighbor was singing Christmas chaloes when he stepped outside.   At work his coffee machine explodes and a quarrelsome pharmacist, came into his store looking for a bottle of medicine that could wake you up in an instant.  All the store had was a loud wristwatch that you could hear from miles away.  Tony, Travis and Taylor tripped into his store at half past one complaining how their friend Bobby got put in jail.  At 2:00, Brent was completly exsaghted.  A warmhearted moneylender, and his best friend George came into the store looking for a large paint brush to paint his house with.  Unfortuantly Brent did not have one, so George left the store feeling very unhappy.  Oslo the vet came to the store right at closing time, and Brent almost ripped a strip off of him, but thanfully didn't.  When he was driving home a earthquake warning comes on the radio, suggesting that everyone needs tot stay at home.  Brent feeling fruststed plays the piano.  The end.  

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Your character travels into the past
Character A joyous managing director
Prop Include a spice bottle
Letter Use the letter Y
Words Reach 50 words
Event Something explodes
Character A quarrelsome pharmacist
Prop Include a wristwatch
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter T
Event Someone goes to prison
Character A warmhearted moneylender
Prop Include a paint brush
Letter Use the letter O
Words Reach 200 words
Event An earthquake hits
Prop Include a piano

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