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shit hole 1

by elliott (: | Score: 6100

Phil has finally done it. He's saved the golden boy from destroying the world, he saved his son and his best buddy is alive. He's done it, he has achieved world peace. His son, Wilbur, is an adventurous aircraft engineer. He made the planes that made it possible for people to escape from the hellhole. "D", they call it. "D", they call him. "D", which stands for Dream. 

Tommy is covered up in bandages in an aircraft that Wilbur is flying, and his eyes are immersed in a comic book. He's never seen one, and although that fact makes Phil's heart ache, he is glad that at least he can read a comic book now.

Tommy's ability caused him to be chased all over the world just a few weeks ago. They don't have to keep running and hiding anymore after Phil made that deal with those people, but Tommy's ability still needs some sort of training. You see, Tommy can time travel, and that fact alone can cause so many chaos and destruction in the world. The fact that Tommy even has a power is already unimaginable in and of itself. Once, Tommy travelled to 1978, before Phil was even born. The boy didn't know he was in the past, because it had been his first time doing so. He was like, 5 years old and he only plucked a flower from a garden. And that, that one singular event alone caused so, so many problems. For starters, it started the career of one of the most famous directors in the world. How? Well, it's complicated, but somehow, Tommy plucking a flower in a garden back in 1978 created an enthusiastic managing director.

Currently, Tommy is fast asleep in his seat, hugging a plush dog close to his chest. The sight alone just tugs at Phil's heart even more, and without him realising, tears started pouring out of his eyes. Years of frustration, panic, and running and everything inside him just crumbled upon seeing Tommy, his son, sleeping soundly. And so, a Dad just sits and cries, looking at his son. 

Technoblade, a close friend of him, who's practically a sensitive barbarian, quietly sits beside Phil and places a comforting hand on his shoulder. The man says nothing, yet Philza knows that this small action alone speaks more words than it seems. He is reminded of so many years ago, when his now dead wife was pregnant with his son, Wilbur. His wife had tightly gripped a bottle of syrup in hand when Wilbur won't stop kicking he

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event World peace is achieved
Words Reach 50 words
Character An adventurous aircraft engineer
Letter Use the letter D
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a comic book
Words Reach 200 words
Event Your character travels into the past
Letter Use the letter R
Character An enthusiastic managing director
Words Reach 300 words
Prop Include a plush dog
Letter Use the letter U
Event Dad just sits and cries
Character A sensitive barbarian
Words Reach 400 words
Event Someone is pregnant
Prop Include a bottle of syrup

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