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The future for Bill and his Nips

by ME SWINGLE | Score: 5050

Bill loved to dance, in fact Bill loved it so much he once signed himself up for strictly! But when he arrived on set he was greeted by an really angry backstage organiser. They rushed him onto set as Bill got lost. His map was out of date since the new roads got built. The backstage crew rushed Bill onto set but he found himself not at strictly. He was standing in front of what looked to him like a massive time travel machine! It was big, round and had a glowing like plasma filling the inside! He was pushed into it and felt every cold piece of plasma cover his body. He fell into a white void. Nothing at all surrounded him! Just white!

He closes his eyes and hopes and wishes for a world to appear! He opens his plasma covered eyes and ends up in a very cold and wintery environment. He looked down at the ground and found a pasta strainer at his feet. Confused Bill picks it up and looks around at his surroundings. He can see a big castle in the distance with a giant donut on top of the roof. He decides that him and his strainer must head to this castle!

On his travels he comes across what seems to be a strange sort of animal. He kneels to the ground and tries to entice the animal to come to him. It wasnt anything like what Bill had seen before. It had seven eyes, one foot and spoken in french! He said "bonjour" and the creature responded.. "bonjour monsieur, j'habit castledonia et toi" Not knowing French Bill couldnt understand the creature. However it pointed him in the direction towards the castle and thats the way he headed. 

Randomly the creature explodes into a thousand pieces! Blood and guts scattered everywhere. Bill rushed over but of course there was nothing left! He worryingly continues on his journey. He hurries as fast as he can towards the castle thinking it may have some answers. He bumps into something else along the way! This time a human! But it didnt speak any language he could understand. Instead it just offered him these strange looking clamps and was pointing at his nip nips. 

Bill reluctantly places the nipples clamps onto his tender nip nips and lets out a small screech. The human thing laughs and calling out what looked to bill as an enthusiastic barbarian ; it twisted the clamps and sent him on his way. Poor Bill and his nip nips!

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include a map
Words Reach 100 words
Event Your character travels into the future
Event Winter is long and extremely cold
Prop Include a pasta strainer
Words Reach 200 words
Letter Use the letter B
Letter Use the letter N
Words Reach 300 words
Event Something explodes
Prop Include a clamp
Words Reach 400 words
Character An enthusiastic barbarian

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