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by Anonymous | Score: 2450

Everything stopped. She couldn't believe it. 

She tried to stumble away. She heard her boyfriend pleading for forgiveness whilst her best friend hung her head in shame. She couldn't believe it. She stumbled to the kitchen with her boyfriend chasing her. 

"Stay away," She said whilst grabbing the only thing on the kitchen counter, a bottle of maple syrup. 

He scoffed. "Baby, we can work it out. We always do."

"Go away," She screamed as he took a step towards her. 

Her boyfriend and her best friend walked out of the house hand in hand as she sat at the kitchen counter cutting bananas to put on her pancake.

She hadn't slept in days because she was planning for her boyfriend's surprise birthday party and she had asked her friend to distract him but she didn't mean like that. 

The sound of baby cries got louder and then there was a knock on the front door. 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Character An artistic shoemaker
Event Everything stops
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include a bottle of syrup
Letter Use the letter G
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a banana
Letter Use the letter S
Event Your character hasn't slept in days

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