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Murder

by Anonymous | Score: 4850

Leona got out of bed, tired that morning. She went downstairs to breakfest, where her father, an uncertain barbarian was standing. He glanced at his wristwatch, which read 9:30. "Leona, you better start to get going. Patrick is waiting for you." "Ok." And so she head off to Patrick's house. Patrick was her friend who was a convicted murderer, but no one knew exept her and Patrick. He avenged his sisters death by killing the killer, a reserved fisherman. When Leona got to Patrick's house, a pair of tongs was sitting on the porch. Leona wondered why it was there. She knocked on the door. Instead of Patrick answering, it was Patrick's mom, Katrina. "Come in, come in," she said. "Winter is extremely cold." As Leona stepped inside, she saw someone else in the house. He looked like a snobby clockmaker. "Ugh, more people?" he muttered. "Sorry, that's our uncle." Patricks coming now." As Katrina said that, a toy plane came zooming down the stairs. "Sorry, mommy, I just wanted to try it," Patrick said. Leona made a strange noise so that Patrick would notice her. "Oh, hi Leona," Patrick said. "Come upstairs with me." As Leona climed up the stairs, she tripped on a feathet 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Event Everything stops
Begin Start typing to begin
Character An uncertain barbarian
Prop Include a wristwatch
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter P
Event A death needs to be avenged
Character A reserved fisherman/woman
Prop Include a pair of tongs
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter K
Event Winter is long and extremely cold
Character A snobby clockmaker
Prop Include a toy plane
Letter Use the letter M
Event There's a strange noise
Words Reach 200 words

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