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A twisted love story

by Avis | Score: 4900

Once there was a young girl. She had a dream to own a far one day. That day came when she became grown.  She bought one. The neighbor came over to welcome here and brought a carton of milk. It was love at first sight. Though it was not the same for him really. That first day she accidentally dumped the milk. He said, "how dare you! This means war!"  She was not sure why exactly. She enjoyed milk as much as anyone. War seemed a bit too far. Never the less, war it was. Nearly everyday he left her milk. Maybe he thought she did not like it since she spilled it. War though. Not really for her. Though he still seemed to think so. It became war when she woke to a squirt gun filled with milk being shot at her.  He dared! She retaliated in kind. He was none to pleased and walked off in a huff. It was then she fell out of love. "repeat after me." She said to herself. "I will not fall for immature guys."

That lasted for all of two days before she met an anaesthetist in super market. He asked her out to dinner and she was all like sure. While there he ate four plates of food. Such gluttony she had never encountered before. They did not have a second date. She was halfway through the first date before she cried out to her bestie for help. Her bestie came to rescue her.

Her date seemed quite mad though and kind of went and murdered her bestie. So she needed to avenge her death! She pelted him with eggs until he submitted. Then the police came and they all went to jail.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Location A farm
Prop Include a carton of milk
Event Someone falls in love
Words Reach 50 words
Sentence "This means war."
Letter Use the letter N
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a squirt gun
Sentence "Repeat after me."
Words Reach 200 words
Character A gluttonous anaesthetist
Letter Use the letter S
Event Someone cries for help
Prop Include an egg
Event A death needs to be avenged

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