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Doom of Mistakes

by GuardianAngelofYN | Score: 4550

Crash! Boom! The earth rattles from the peaceful slumber that it had been hibernating for many years. It was like a vampire awakening. Hundreds of people scream in panic. Buildings collapse as civilians rush out and about of the city. Each tremor scares the living daylights out of everyone. It was the feeling of being a soccer ball that was kicked around like a piece of garbage. Dusts fly into your eyes. Nothing was safe here anymore. We failed, for we have ignored the damages we caused to our own home. Cars were abandoned and so were children that got seperated from their families. Then, just like an ocean wave, a hush fell over the city with an unwelcoming silence. An ambitious delivery driver tried to rescue those who were injured. The sky crackled with a warning of storm. 

You feel your hairs on your neck stand up as something felt like a ticking time bomb. A broken toy plane settled in the crack of the sidewalk. Your world was a painting with depressing paint brush lines. Nothing was ever going to be the same. We were too late. If only we read the signs of danger earlier, everything would have been okay. 

A window shatters nearby which was someone trying to escape their doom. Don't be too late. Don't end like us.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event An earthquake hits
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include a soccer ball
Character A slight engineer
Event Someone is pregnant
Letter Use the letter V
Words Reach 100 words
Character An ambitious delivery driver
Event There is a great storm
Letter Use the letter N
Prop Include a toy plane
Letter Use the letter B
Prop Include a paint brush
Words Reach 200 words
Event A glass shatters

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