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Bye Bye Carla

by Renold | Score: 5150

A wail echoed from the back of the room.
"CArlA!" Renold cried honking his nose on a drenched tissue. "Oh my pour Carla!" The poor shop assistant, so confident of normal days, wailed as he watched her casket being walked through the isle. On a computer screen, there was the news on how Carla died. She had gotten food poisoning.
"CAAAARRRRRRRLLLLLLAAAAA!" He cried. An unguarded fisherwoman no longer, she had been in dispare so long that she had eaten herself to sleep. Too bad this food was actually 6 months off date. She had died in the night her face as swollen as anything hugging her plush dog. Even now, they had put her in the casket hugging the little creature. Suddenly, Renold had the best idea in the midst of his crying. A life changing idea in fact. Bring Carla back to life. 
As a cynical shcool crossing warden went up to the stand to talk about his experiences with Carla, Renold thought about all of the possibilities. Even through the mist of someone sleeping in the back.
"ZZZZZ" he said. If Renold hadn't been lost in thought, he probably would have chucked the bottle of syrup he was holding at the man. Glass shattered from outside of the cathedral. Everyone turned. A window had been broken through by some migit hoolagin. This women had a name tag that indecated she was part of the bodyguard staff. Probably to one of those rich people who attended Carla's funeral. This bodyguard, in addition to her odd appearance, was quite childish in nature. 
"Oui!" She exclaimed. She pointed back at the different direc

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Someone passes away
Letter Use the letter S
Character A confident shop assistant
Prop Include a computer
Words Reach 50 words
Event Someone gets food poisoning
Character An unguarded fisherman/woman
Letter Use the letter T
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a plush dog
Event Someone has a world-changing idea
Character A cynical school crossing warden
Letter Use the letter Z
Words Reach 200 words
Prop Include a bottle of syrup
Event A glass shatters
Character A childish bodyguard

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