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The tar.

by Anonymous | Score: 4750

  It was early in the morning, when I heard an eerie noise coming from outside the door, it seemed like there was an un explainable force keeping me from opening the door, my arm was sweating uncontrollably and for once in my life I felt real fear. I fought myself to open the dorr and boom! I slammed the dorr against the wall to reveal the kitchen in my rv in shambles. The cabinets lay destroyed on the ground and a bottle of maple syrup was diluted by a dark tar like mass that had the stench of rotting flesh. My fridge was opened and the food was all over the place, my couch was shredded apart and as I was anylizing the my home, I peered over to seethe front door opened. I walked outside to see a trail of the same tar go through the unnerving woods, the wind sounded like moaning, and my footsteps were muffled by the storm in the distance. I followed the trail, I was terrified but I felt a nedd to uncover whatever or whoever made that mess. Every step made my curiosity grow, I felt like I was losing my mind, what did that mess? I asked myself that over and over again until I reached a cave. The wind that followed me now seemed to be a force pushing me into the cave itself. My fear was only overpowered by my curiosity. I walked forward into the cave and i felt like something was watching me. I continued forward into the cave when I saw it. I stood in terror, I saw the corpse of a man and it was covered by that same disgusting tar that I had seen in the kitchen minutes before, and I saw it eating away at the corpse and growing ever so more...

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event There's a strange noise
Character A joyous sailor
Words Reach 50 words
Event There is a great storm
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a bottle of syrup
Character A talented builder
Prop Include a desk
Event An important phone number is lost
Letter Use the letter S
Words Reach 200 words
Character A positive firefighter
Prop Include a banana
Event An earthquake hits

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