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Goggles and a eye.

by Noah Jensen | Score: 4150

When it comes to life what happens to us? Well, the thing is we all die, but for today somebody did die. In New York City's very own pool there lay a pair of goggles. The goggles are mysterious because they're covered in blood and an eye inside. "Can somebody please explain why there's an eye in these goggles?"
Because somebody is missing an eye of course. Later that day they did a DNA test. The test resulted that the person was named Jack Kinnen who was a Slow aircraft engineer. As the detectives left the building there was a great storm with a bottle of lotion floating down the street in the flood of water. Then the detective remembered he saw a suspicious lady who was at the pool. He remembered all the reports of the inspections. Where he asked many people what they were doing one said they were sleeping another said they were straining their arms in a workout. Another said they were robbing a bank. The one who was strained was a teacher assistant. Aha, it must be her then. They drove to get here as quick as possible when a plush dog was in their way. The dog wouldn't move so they kicked it a few times. They then had a unguarded warden comes up who was hired to kill the officers.

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Prop Include a pair of water goggles
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter C
Character A slow aircraft engineer
Words Reach 100 words
Prop Include a bottle of lotion
Event There is a great storm
Letter Use the letter W
Event A bank is robbed
Character A stern teaching assistant
Event A murder needs to be solved
Words Reach 200 words
Prop Include a plush dog
Letter Use the letter T

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