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The day everything went wrong.

by Georgia | Score: 3100

blackness all around, flying embers, wind howling. I grab my collection of shirt buttons and pack my clothes ready to run from the fire. Driving the car, squinting my eyes to see the road, then boom I slam the breaks down and see my very passionate teaching assistant running on bare foot, I ask her to come into the car and we'll go to my parents house, where breakfast will served. We drive past the melbourne zoo and saw a rhino running across the road. The fire is catching up with up, the passionate teaching assistant turns out to also is an average judge. We finally reach out destination and we hear a shrill cry echoing in the mist, we run into the house and see my dad past out on the floor, mum crying her eyes out. 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event The air turns black all around
Prop Include a shirt button
Letter Use the letter D
Words Reach 50 words
Character A passionate teaching assistant
Event Breakfast is served
Prop Include a rhino
Words Reach 100 words
Character An average judge
Event A shrill cry echoes in the mist

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