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Satisfying Soap A Step To Far

by I.A.G | Score: 4100

every thing. it wasn't moving. it wasn't even moving a little. even the drunk engineer was standing still. but why was i still moving? i looked around as i stood in the middle of the busy road. i tried to find something moving like me but as much as i looked i couldn't find it. Until i walked past a jewellery shop where they were selling a locket in the window. it was moving back and forth as it hung from the plastic hand holding it. i then looked up to see if anything else was moving or to see what was moving it to then notice a little girl standing behind me playing with the same necklace. She was staring at me. i called out but she quickly turned and ran away. i chased after her calling out to know what was going on. she then entered into a soap shop. A bar of soap came flying past my head as the girl chucked it through the window of the shop. "Hey HEY stop what do you want?"
"Its your fault."
"What is? I've done nothing wrong. do you know why this is happening."
"My dad thought it was very bad food poisoning but he was very wrong. Very Very wrong."
the girl began to laugh and then everyone standing still around turned into a bar of soap. collapsing into soap that then broke apart and spread across the ground. a sstoic book keeper in a plane

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Words Reach 50 words
Event Everything stops
Prop Include a locket
Character A drunk engineer
Letter Use the letter T
Words Reach 100 words
Event Your character is being watched
Prop Include a bar of soap
Words Reach 200 words
Letter Use the letter V
Event Someone gets food poisoning
Character A stoic book-keeper
Prop Include a pair of safety goggles

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