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What you don't notice

by Ren | Score: 850

Their song was playing...
He smiled deeply. 
She was talking to a friend by the bar.
Looking up they lock eyes, he waves. 
She smiles and turns to set her drink on the bar .
Hey friend tells her she'll be right back.
She nobs. 
He's coming up behind her now. Yes! He muses tonight IS the night.
Silently he approaches ( or perhaps it's just the fact the music is so loud one can scarcely here their own thoughts).
He brushes the glass ever so slightly. 
( A white power sprinkles into her martini.) 
He moves to lean on the bar and waits.
Her friend is back and they talk loudly trying to hear each other over 

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