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Edmund and The Mist Demons

by Jay Hunsletts | Score: 2150

Bang! 
Edmund's life flashed before his eyes. The moment he first met his wife who worked as his dentist. The moment from last night's dinner where his daughter completely downed a spice bottle.
Where did it all go wrong?
How was he now inside a bank, attempting to rob it?
Bang! Snap back to reality!
In front of him was now a bank teller bleeding to death. Joey came out from the vaults carrying bags of gold and he gave Edmund a pat on the back.
"Let's get out of here before we get this blood on our shoes eh?"
During the day Joey worked as a shoe maker but by night he was an internationally renowned gentlemen thief.

Suddenly a shrill cry echoes from outside of the
 shop. Edmund peers out an sees only mist.
Ca-Thunk.
The bags of gold Joey had held hit the floor.
"The fucking mist demons. I knew this heist was to good to be true"
"Shit! What do we do!" cried Edmund
"We see these fuckers. We shoot. Simple" Joey nodded his head.

Five mist demons b

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Character A patient dentist
Prop Include a spice bottle
Letter Use the letter T
Words Reach 50 words
Event A bank is robbed
Words Reach 100 words
Character An independent shoemaker
Letter Use the letter E

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