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Barnie and Me

by Sean Byler | Score: 6100

I saw the man, he was standing there,  alone.  All of a sudden, my ears seared with pain. I was deaf. I screamed, clutching my ears. The man looked at me, and pulled out a banana eating it. 
"Hello," he said. "I'm an executive for Amazon."
I thought it was quite a strange thing for him to say, but I shook it off. A scream split the air, and all of a sudden aliens were flying in from the sky, killing everyone in their way. I screamed as the man who said he was an Amazon executive morphed into a alien! But thankfully the most popular inventor in the world, Barnie Wood, came to my rescue and disinigrated the alien with his handy gadget. He was wearing a skiing jacket, since we was known for his wacky looks. I stared at him, and he stared back.
"You're my role model," I gasped. "Can I get an autograph?"
"Of course," he replied, "I'm the best and kindest inventor in the world!"
In that moment, a murderur tried to kill a person in the street, but I called 911 and I solved the mystery of the Lipstick Killer! I was very happy, so I decided to order some Pizza. It came, but the driver was very rude and unwilling, really wanting a tip, and strangely, and paint brush. After that, I got an autograph and ate pizza with Barnie, and we had such a fun time! We went roller skating and also took a trip to DisneyLand! It was the most fun I've ever had. But then we remembered the world was being destroyed by the aliens, so we stopped them with Barnie's gadgets. Once we did that, some of Barnie's important data was stolen! we had to kill the man behind it all and then we went to the bank. There, a bank clerk tryied to steal some money and a tissue box. 

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Event Your character goes deaf
Character A passive advertising executive
Prop Include a banana
Words Reach 50 words
Letter Use the letter A
Event Aliens invade
Words Reach 100 words
Character A popular inventor
Prop Include a skiing jacket
Event A murder needs to be solved
Words Reach 200 words
Letter Use the letter B
Prop Include a paint brush
Character An unwilling delivery driver
Letter Use the letter H
Words Reach 300 words
Event Important data is stolen
Prop Include a tissue box
Character An immodest bank clerk

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