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The Deep

by Alissa Sage | Score: 3300

Harvard walked sluggishly to the bar, already holding a drink in his hand. Quinn, his buddy, observed him from a distance. "You need me to drive you home?" He asked. Harvard looked at Quinn. "Just because you're a economist doesn't mean you're a better driver than me." Harvard replied. Quinn chuckled"Well, I am healthier than you, making me more aware and able to drive! I eat tomatoes, carrots, stuff like that." Quinn frowned. "Ever since Clara passed you've been a mess." Harvard looked at him. "Quinn, you're not hurting like I'm hurtin'." Harvard told him. "You won't know you this real till you know how this feels." He said sluggishly. The friends walked inside the bar, letting the air conditioner blow on them. Harvard took another drink. He became dizzy and couldn't sleep. The drink blinded him. "Ha! You youngs people couldn't keeps yourselves away from a drink, eh?" A snobby clock maker laughed. The radio blared 90's music. "We gotta get outta here, buddy." Harvard grabbed hi

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Character A distant economist
Words Reach 50 words
Prop Include a tomato
Event Someone passes away
Letter Use the letter Q
Character A mature bailiff
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter Y
Prop Include an air conditioner
Event Your character goes blind
Character A snobby clockmaker
Letter Use the letter C
Prop Include a radio

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