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The Murder in family

by MJB | Score: 5100

The man lay on the ground dead, Every single person in the room was a suspect. The detective  was clueless to who did it. He thought it could anyone even himself.  considering he gets dead drunk and kills people all the time. the dread each person was on the edge of their seat. The patient bodyguard waiting for the old but rich man to speak up about a clue he found.  A clamp he found it on the ground laying next to the body he eta it  hiding from the others .

The detective spoke:

it could be any of you. The waiter or even the old man with a bloody knife in his hand. But i know it to be true that it wasn't me"

he then slaps the doctor. The detective was the murder and now all alone hiding from the others. he pours all the blood out of his backpack. they burst through the door and all attack him. Sending him out of the door while holding a gun . then a confident school crossing warden bursts out of a wall on a bed and drives out the front door then a rhino runs and kills the confident school warden. he was only an average builder for the school and a warden
he sees his dad cry out for his death.

"my boy, my boy, you killed him. Oh my word"

The detective slaps the dad out of his way and
sits down eating a tomato as all of the people corner him and arrest him

Completed challenges

The following challenges were completed during the writing exercise:

Begin Start typing to begin
Letter Use the letter P
Words Reach 50 words
Character A patient bodyguard
Event A murder needs to be solved
Prop Include a clamp
Words Reach 100 words
Letter Use the letter U
Event Your character is all alone
Event It pours
Letter Use the letter H
Prop Include a bed
Character A confident school crossing warden
Words Reach 200 words
Prop Include a rhino
Character An average builder
Letter Use the letter O
Event Dad just sits and cries
Prop Include a tomato

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